Noel989 Posted August 12, 2015 Report Share Posted August 12, 2015 Bola you need to figure out when to come in and when to get out, your verses are somewhat short(they feel like that cause you just stop) if that's all you wanted to say figure out how to fit that into the beat The other guy has good flow, came in when he was suppose to but just stopped at the end? And is the chorus in my hood you're either rapping or...?? If it is you need to make it a bit different so it doesn't sound like the rest Quote Build Log - http://www.stevemead...-cruiser-el-pt/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmed Johnson Posted August 13, 2015 Report Share Posted August 13, 2015 (edited) The beat is nice. Honestly, I sat here and rapped your hook a little slower to match the tempo of the beat and it sounded way better. Jo if you just slow your flow down a little it would fit inside the beats and sound way better. Edited August 13, 2015 by Ahmed Johnson Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ahmed Johnson Posted August 13, 2015 Report Share Posted August 13, 2015 much better than the stuff from 6 months ago work on the voice style a bit too for fun if you cant sing your rap it doesnt have much harmony I agree Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jessica Posted August 13, 2015 Report Share Posted August 13, 2015 see i cant say anything cause i will probably get bant. So i can click things. Im going back into the shadows cause alcohol 2 Quote Rest in peace, walled 87 accord build log 03' Corolla build with AA Mayhem inside. My super random youtube channel and terrible camera work. Wiring comparison by CaptainzPlanetz Wire and fuse guide by Guest SyKo13 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broke_Audio_Addict Posted August 13, 2015 Report Share Posted August 13, 2015 (edited) A Edited August 13, 2015 by Broke_Audio_Addict 2 Quote That being said a lot of people's definition of "music" is a clipped 30 hz sine wave with some 80 IQ knuckle head grunting about committing crimes and his genitals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miguels Posted August 13, 2015 Report Share Posted August 13, 2015 i dont know who she is but she is too young to die Quote my logshttp://www.stevemead...-my-new-set-up/my blow through loghttp://www.stevemead...future-updates/ 96 ss http://www.stevemeadedesigns.com/board/topic/164094-96-impala-ss-build/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Broke_Audio_Addict Posted August 13, 2015 Report Share Posted August 13, 2015 i dont know who she is but she is too young to die She didn't die, she had a breast reduction. bye girls. Quote That being said a lot of people's definition of "music" is a clipped 30 hz sine wave with some 80 IQ knuckle head grunting about committing crimes and his genitals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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