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Carroot1

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  1. Look dude I gotta go but here is an example of what your citations should look like.

    Instead of saying................Cutting down tres causes pollution ("Pollution paper" 1).

    It should be this. "Cutting down trees causes pollution" (Pollution Paper 1).

    and I also saw where u did this.....Cutting down trees causes pollution (pollution paper1). Planting more trees helps fight this (pollution paper 1). So plant more trees (pollution paper 1)....

    This is the correct way. "Cutting down trees causes pollution. Planting more trees helps fight this. So plant more trees" (pollution paper 1).

    See what happened? as long as its on the same page then you can use multiple sentences.

    I've gotta go, hope this helps.

    No i didn't mean citing it like that. she checked all of my citations and stuff. we aren't using those quotes

  2. Finkster helped alot.

    Anyways, watch out for be verbs. Avoid using them. (am, are, is, was, were, been, being, be, I’m, he’s, we’re, you’re, it’s, isn’t, aren’t)You'll have to change around sentences but your paper will benefit greatly.

    Also, make sure you keep the same tense, and Avoid using "I". Other than that and what Finkster said, I'd say the paper is at LEAST C. Hopefully you have a completed MLA works cited page?

    yea i have the works cited mla and the outline.

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