my first "dub step" type beat

[benz280se]

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?yga2nlvxtv83a3h if any body has any suggestions i'd like to hear them. if some one could show this playing on their system it would be greatly appreciated. i am stationed in korea but my car is back in the states, this has very low bass and i think it should flex some woofers pretty good. holla

EDIT: i calmed the track down after reading the replies, think it sounds much better now. new link added to download.

Edited July 23, 2011 by benz280se

[ChevyBoy95]

its pretty good, but the bells or whatever it is for the first bit is a bit much for my taste, but a damn good job to say the least. some parts there is too much going on, but overall 8/10.

[Dubpower]

right, not that great

you would wanna take a tune like this

then you mix it and end up with this

[benz280se]

its pretty good, but the bells or whatever it is for the first bit is a bit much for my taste, but a damn good job to say the least. some parts there is too much going on, but overall 8/10.

thanks for the review i will scale down some of the sounds like the bells and try to cut back on using too much samples. it's hard to get a feel for what it really sounds like in the barracks since i can't turn up the system too loud.