GRITS Posted October 8, 2010 Report Share Posted October 8, 2010 That's pretty deep. I feel like you access pain from the past and funnel it onto the paper to paint an dark emotional image to allow those to feel what you've been through. If I'm wrong I'm wrong, but none the less I'd like to read more. Well when those transpired I was having a "break through crisis" . I am an emotional writer (which has prolly been seen all over this site) cant help it it's just the way I am. I actually thought the first response was going to be a ridicule as usual when expressing parts of my life on here. But I thank you for the compliment. But when people ask me to write more (like you sayin you would like to read more) I cant do it. The newspaper here asked me if I would be their weekly Spotlight Editorial and I couldnt do it. But when I do write I write to express my feeling (love, or pain), its not for any other purpose than to get it out. I do have a corny love poem I wrote about 10 yrs ago. Maybe when I feel brave enough I'll share it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryde2idie Posted October 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Yup you're pretty good and I understand wanting to hold back. Quote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GRITS Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Thank you that means a lot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chodette69 Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 Well when those transpired I was having a "break through crisis" . I am an emotional writer (which has prolly been seen all over this site) cant help it it's just the way I am. I actually thought the first response was going to be a ridicule as usual when expressing parts of my life on here. But I thank you for the compliment. But when people ask me to write more (like you sayin you would like to read more) I cant do it. The newspaper here asked me if I would be their weekly Spotlight Editorial and I couldnt do it. But when I do write I write to express my feeling (love, or pain), its not for any other purpose than to get it out. I do have a corny love poem I wrote about 10 yrs ago. Maybe when I feel brave enough I'll share it. awwww!!!!! i wanna read the love poems!!! i love poetry! i never met guys who wrote...then i saw this thread n i jumped on it lol!!!! <3 p.s i think everyones poems were VERY good <3 Quote ~*Ima Princess*~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GRITS Posted October 11, 2010 Report Share Posted October 11, 2010 psst <----- Female Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryde2idie Posted October 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2010 Heres one I wrote this morning with a pretty simple pattern. Knowledge and confidence are some of the general additives to thy soul which issue verbal laxatives dropping bombs on the mold that inhibits your brain, releasing the strain and enlightening the power of the people bringing an end to the reign Quote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryde2idie Posted November 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 Using psychological sociology they take the interests of the human race and make it compatible in a mathematical equation to determine what steps need to be taken to keep the population in an uneducated situation. Can you feel me reversing your negative and positive thoughts about different images like the Nazis did the Swastika? Quote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sanitarium Posted November 21, 2010 Report Share Posted November 21, 2010 Here I sit, same as ever. Took a shit, pulled the lever. The toiled swirled, the water flowed. Look out world, it's a motherload. -Mike Judge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Torres Posted November 23, 2010 Report Share Posted November 23, 2010 (edited) here's a couple i had to write for english 101. i think i took it a year ago. this one is about running and facing your past For what seems like forever, He runs in despair From the beasts and shadows That are forever there. He runs fast as sound And quiet as night, Thinking that just maybe, Maybe, he might, Escape from the horror, Torment, and blight. Still not fast enough, He keeps on his mission To find himself peace With enduring ambition. But in order to do this, To achieve such a task We must learn not to run, but to face our own past. then a friend and i wrote this in high school for english. 9/11 happened that year or the year after The day was young, So beautiful and clear. The people lived on Not knowing what to fear. Some were just waking And others were working Inside the Trade Centers When terrorists came lurking. All of a sudden From out of the sky Two planes hit the towers And thousands will die. Some saw it coming To others a surprise. People all over the city Couldn't believe their eyes. Everyone ran Not wanting to die With only thinking Of saving their lives. Thousands of people Are now in despair From the family they lost Who are no longer there. Even to this day Many still cry From the thoughts and memories That keep Passing by Edited November 23, 2010 by Torres Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ryde2idie Posted November 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2010 Wow dude lol just wow. That was amazing, I really enjoyed and connected while reading those two. heres one i just wrote its short. Shifty eyed and shifty minded I stay quiet like a moment of silence. Never hurt no one never caused no pain but they stray from my way like I'm clinically insane Quote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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