Twigz Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 (edited) death is all ways on my mind I know i'm running out of time without death there can be no life will I ever find a wife these are all things I think about and wishing I did not like one day I could get shot just walking down my block the world is so corrupt so hard just to make a buck so many people who don't give a fuck why can't I get these thoughts out of my head why do I look at people like there all ready dead? just a memory something that's all ready past how long is my life gonna last? what does the future hold? am I ever gonna live to grow old? what in life do I behold? when will my destiny unfold? am I normal? or a freak? am i strong? or am i weak? I've made a decision Death is inevitable and cannot be bribed I used to smoke and go get high just watch life pass me by so many years past memories that didn't last my parents are giving me there will just thinking bout it makes me ill what will life be without them by my side? my father there as my guide and my mother my only protector to leave me and my brother a lone like a king without a throne a dog without a bone death is unknown an echo without a voice once you are born your timer begins can you run? only so far.... death will get you I guess I never realized how much my parents met to me until all of a sudden it's a reality they aren't gonna be here forever and I took them for granted never thinking bad bout there health or wealth or what we have just thinking every things gonna be ok and all problems will go away Tommorrow I witness there will and it makes me feel ill what will life be without them by my side? my father there as my guide and my mother my only protector to leave me and my brother a lone like a king without a throne..... a dog without a bone....... death is unknown....... an echo without a voice........ we are all gonna die there is no choice...... but there is reason I'm giving up smoking it's left my mom heart broken it's fucked up my health to the fullest degree i'm only 22 and feel like i'm 93 My advice to you all live life to the fullest with no regrets and never look at the people around you as just another memory because before you know it u'll be a poet looking at a photo and your parents and the ones you love will just be a memory there spirits will look at you from above and death will be coming and one day some one else will be looking at a photo of you and you'll be the one looking down from above and in the end you've become the memory Well, I know every1 hates me on this forum I don't expect any replies but this made me feel better. For the record, I'm not Emo, but i'm bi-polar and don't take treatment so shit like this pops into my head. :01nocomment8so: Anyways, I guess the purpose behind this poem is that i'm going to "try" my "hardest" to give up "smoking" for myself, my brother, mom & dad because the last thing I wanna do is feel guilty that when they die I broke a promise that I promised a long time ago that before they die, I will quit for good. Edit: for that kid who started the "i started smoking thread" cuz of school stress & bull shit reasons, here's sum more motivation for you". Edit: This is not a cry for an attention, I could give a fuck less if any1 wants to call me emo, I never thought I would have to hear my parents Will and it's simply a lot to swallow so I wrote this poem to help deal with it. Edit: I am going to break all my ciggerettes I have left tommorrow, half a pack, and a full pack, as well as all my lighters which will be a hard thing to do, and I will post the pictures here as proof and if any1 else want's to join in they may Post pictures of them doing it to. nobody likes a quitter, but u wasn't born a smoker, so ur not really quitting in the first place your simply fixing a mistake you should never had made. Edited September 5, 2009 by Twigz Quote Fear The Quack! Shot at 2007-08-19 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Playa Named Joe Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 That's deep. damn... I think I should stop... Quote 1994 Pontiac Grand Prix build Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
will77530 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 i think i just quit smoking Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bumpindemlowzz Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Im guessing that only like 10% of smokers that quit cold turkey make it. Im not one of them and been trying to quit. Your right dont start something that you know is wrong. ohh well live and learn hopefully i quit before i go to basic training (army) in november. Quote 2010 Silverado 18" DC XL 18 DC 2k XS Power Batts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bunker Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 (edited) I don't hate you, I don't think your emo either. Man once you figure out 80 to 90 percent of the people in this world are all talk and no walk you will be better off, you cant let their words get to you man because that's all it is, is words. Haters have to be the worst not because they really do hate you there just envious. From experience when someone close to you passes away it hurts and it can fuck with your head, but at the end of the day you have to let it go and it can be hard at times but what doesn't kill you will only make you stronger. In my eyes never let anyone run you over, if you let someone do it once they will do it again. To stop smoking cold turkey it's tough and good luck. Edited September 5, 2009 by Bunker Quote J&T DESIGNS M5 4 Audioque 15's copper coils dropping Audiopipe, and picking up DB DRIVE OKUR Powermasters XS POWER Dropping MaxxSonics Pioneer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BIGD502 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 hey man i think you can do it i didnt think it was possible for a while there i was smokin a little bit of everything then one day i got caught and thats what it took is seeing the effect it had on my family when they found out and i flat stopped right then and there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alphasig293 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Good luck bro with your decision on quiting smoking. That poem was deep, you should write more bro. I don't hate you, I don't even know you. If you need someone to talk to about problems man, im sure its more than a handful of guys on here, including me that will be glad to listen. Quote 2005 Lariat F-150 On 30 inch DUBS 6 Crossfire XS-V2 18's 2 Cactus 12k's, 1 Cactus 1000, 1 sundown 100.4 12 - 6.5 Crescendo mids and 4 Crescendo supertweets SMD 340 alt, Mechman 270 alt 7 NSB 170 batterys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbondox Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 you don't own any firearms do you? Egads Quote SMD SuperSeller VerifiedJbondoXJames Shields Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BIGD502 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Good luck bro with your decision on quiting smoking. That poem was deep, you should write more bro. I don't hate you, I don't even know you. If you need someone to talk to about problems man, im sure its more than a handful of guys on here, including me that will be glad to listen. WORD^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MXmike800 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 wow man, that poem was deep. take it easy and good luck quitting bro SMD is here for ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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